Friday, 15 March 2013

PEEL Paragraph - Bryan, Yong Jie, Kevin

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Point

The increasing access to the internet has created more problems than solutions in the area of online privacy as it becomes much easier for users to access another person’s personally information on online social platforms.  

Explanation

With the exponential increase in the number of networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter available online, online users would set up their pages, blogs and profiles within these sites, and put up bits of information about themselves. These informations will may help to make connections with people who have similar interests and goals. However, these users might unwittingly publish private information and data about themselves in the process, and despite the constantly improving security of the various social networking sites, hackers, stalkers, and other cyber criminals are still able to obtain these private information and use it against the users. These cyber crimes include blackmail, spam, virus attack, phishing, online scams and frauds. These crimes does not only apply to individual users. Many big companies and major corporations, which heavily rely on these social networking sites for advertisement purposes, have fallen prey to these cyber crimes as well, which resulted in leaked news like secretly revealing a certain company's plans, legal issues, and a loss in sales and profit.


Evidence

An example that can be used to represent this point is Facebook, a social networking site, where internet users can use this social network platform to communicate with friends or find them online. Facebook allow users to put up information about themselves and get to know more about people they just met and keep close contact with them. On the contrary, the personal information put up by the user’s can be easily accessible by anyone on the internet and there would be a high chance of it being used to deceive or blackmail them as most users are not careful of what they put on social networks.  


Linkback/Weighing

As such, the increasing access to information on the internet is actually more of a bane than a boon. The internet made a world a better global community in both a good and a bad way. However, as the internet becomes more advanced, accessing information through the internet has made privacy more of an issue. Otherwise, face-to-face interactions would be a better choice for an socially active person as one won’t have to worry about privacy. (Weighing)

PEEL Paragraph by Ethan, Jovan and Terrence

Point
The increasing access to information on the internet has created more problems than solutions, especially when people’s privacy are involved, information can be easily taken off the internet regarding anyone that could be used against them.

Explanation
As the internet is made available to more people, more people are putting information about anything and everything online. This includes personal information. Although people may think that by setting a privacy setting on the information they put online can protect their information, this is not the case all the time, as this ‘protected’ information can still be used for marketing purposes on sites in which they are stored in. Ever wondered why you receive certain advertisements when you are surfing the Net? This is because sites that store your personal information sell this information to advertising sites, allowing to know what advertisements they should send you. This is why information put online is not always safe and can be used by others if need be. However, some sites, which require personal information to be stored in their databases, do not sell out their users’ information as it has been stated in some form of documentation that they are not allowed to sell out these information without the authorization of the user.


Evidence
A good example would be Facebook, a social networking website that has over one billion users to date. This social networking website allow people to share their information with one another when they are not near each other, which has made it very popular. However, there has been cases where the games that are integrated into the website had accessed the users’ personal information for marketing purposes. There are also situations where random strangers who may not know the user at all have stalked the user, as Facebook can register the users’ location and at what time they were there, which allows people to stalk them. This also allows these stalkers to be able to harm you if they wish by going to wherever you are. However, this ease of sharing information with friends and relatives on Facebook also helps to let them know what is going on around you. And if you are one to reveal your whereabouts through Facebook, and you were to go missing, you can easily be traced and found with the aid of this information being easily accessible.


Linking
Therefore, the increasing access to information on the internet has not been so much of a boon as it has been a bane. With easily accessible personal information online, people can easily make use of these information to cause harm to you or your loved ones. In such a case, one should take precautionary measures and remove all and stop putting up personal information to ensure the safety of you and those around you.


- Ethan, Jovan & Terrence

PEEL Paragraph (Ryan, Hung Kye and Gladys)

Point
The increasing access to information on the internet has created more problems than solutions in the field of personal privacy. The easy access to the vast amount of information notably in social media sites has allowed people to connect with each other more easily but has caused great harms to some as well.

Explanation
The uploading of information online is a popular method to spread urgent messages within different communities. With rapidly increasing amounts of usage on social media websites, there are a lot of personal information that is put up for the public to see. These websites allow one to identify that person and generally know who he or she is easily online. However, there are also integrated functions such as sharing of real-time location which lets users display their actual location on their friends news feeds. This in turn can lead to great danger as strangers may choose to locate and follow this particular person. Therefore there is an increase in chances of the user being stalked or kidnapped. Therefore sometimes security measures are not enough to prevent these acts from happening.

Example
An article on a recent study in blog.kissmetrics.com in the mid-2011s shows that Facebook, a social-networking site has an average of 500 millions active users and there are more than 30 billion pieces of content shared each month. The sharing of information allows friends and relatives to stay in touch with each other. Nevertheless, there still will be lurking hackers who are ready to scam and cheat unprepared users and retrieve their personal information due to easy accessibility of information on the internet.   

Link/ Weighing
Hence, this goes to show that easy access to information on the internet is more of a bane than a boon. Even though the availability of information online is useful for other kinds of purposes, there is always the possibility of stolen information which might lead to loss of privacy and monetary value owing to hackers on social media platforms.
In conclusion, the spreading of information through hard-copy methods or personal communication would be a safer option than sharing it online.

- Gladys, Hung Kye and Ryan

Thursday, 14 March 2013

PEEL

Point
The increasing access to information on the internet has created more problems than solutions, especially in the security field where scams are prominent as swindler are able to obtaining personal information through social networking sites.

Explanation
With the usage of social networking sites, more personal information is floating in the internet.This information can be accessed very easily and can be used to plan deceiving scams. The usage of personal information make these scams convincing.Therefore, people easily fall for them and may suffer huge monetary losses. However, social networking sites have made communication effective and convenient. Due to social networking communication is possible without having to meet physically.


Evidence
A good example to illustrate this point is the use of a popular social networking site Facebook as a form of networking communication by numerous people. The ease of not having to meet physically thus making communication convenient has made it popular. On the other hand, its nature of allowing strangers to view their personal information also opens it up to a higher chance of people falling for scams as swindler are able to obtain first hand information about a particular person without much trouble.


Linking
As such, the increase access to information on the internet is actually more of a bane than a boon. Social networking sites are useful tools when it comes to effective communication. However, individuals can be in danger when their personal information have been used by swindler for the wrong reasons

-Akhila
-Yan Kai

Thursday, 28 February 2013

Points for Summary (Fit or Fat)


1 mark for each correct point up to 8 marks                                                                [8]

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devised a national heavyweight programme called Trim & Fit (TAF),
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which focuses on physical activity and proper nutrition.
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Health fairs, talks and exhibitions are conducted in schools.
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School canteens are discouraged from serving aerated or sweetened drinks.
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as well as foods that have high fat, sugar or salt content.
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Children are also encouraged to consume fruits, vegetables and whole grains.
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Obese students are referred to nutrition clinics.
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Parents of obese children have to attend workshops on healthy diets and good eating habits.
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In order to encourage parents to look out for their children’s health,
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the Ministry of Education has linked a child’s academic performance to his health and weight.
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In Hong Kong, health seminars and weight-loss programmes have been implemented in hospitals for obese children.
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Obese children are also recommended for courses by their doctors. 

Wednesday, 27 February 2013

More on the Budget 2013

Please read this article and the related ones, if possible, in preparation for lesson on 28 Feb 2013.


Tuesday, 26 February 2013

Singapore Budget 2013


Hi all,

I strongly urge you to read the budget documents and critically think about how it would affect your family and you in the new financial year.

The following links is from AsiaOne and serves as a springboard for you to find out more.

Happy Reading!

http://www.asiaone.com/News/Budget/Budget.html

Wednesday, 20 February 2013

Sample Conclusion


*QN: Air travel should be discouraged, not promoted. To what extent do you agree?
     [TD] To conclude, [stand] by and large, air travel should be promoted, not discouraged. [summary] The air transport industry is an innovative industry that drives economic and social progress. With technological breakthroughs and the increased capacity to fly more people at increasingly cheaper prices, the popularity of air travel will only continue to grow. [closing line] With all these in mind, it is hardly sensible or even possible for us to discourage the continued expansion of this exciting and beneficial industry.

Tuesday, 19 February 2013

Introduction Paragraph

Hi all,

Please remember to refer to your PEEL assignment and the requirements of the introduction paragraph we went through in class. Thereafter, craft your very own introduction in response to your PEEL assignment and post it onto this blog.

We will then critique your works in class on 20 Feb, Wednesday.

See you tomorrow!

Mr Stanley Lim

Wednesday, 16 January 2013

Extensive Reading Programme Assignments

Hi all,

Please download the assignment document for the Extensive Reading Programme and be mindful of the tasks and their respective deadlines.

The document can be found in the English Language Googlesite in the 'Extensive Reading Programme' folder.

Cheers.

Wednesday, 9 January 2013

A Brainstorming Tool

Hi all,

Please create an account with this application for the purpose of brainstorming in class.

Thanks.

http://en.linoit.com/


Friday, 4 January 2013

EL Administrative Matters

Hi all,

Please be informed that there will be an EL diagnostics test during the first EL lesson next week. You will need writing papers for the task which is a reflection on  New Year resolutions. There will be an article for you to read and springboard to attempt the task but you do need your own inputs as well.

Please take the weekend to think of a time when you last made New Year resolutions and come to class prepared to complete the diagnostics test.

See you next week and have a great weekend!