tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.comments2023-01-09T14:00:51.099+08:002013 S3-04 English Language BlogAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10203295096575450236noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-19504340834545863022013-07-10T12:51:45.414+08:002013-07-10T12:51:45.414+08:00Band 2
1) Pronunciation was not very clear at som...Band 2<br /><br />1) Pronunciation was not very clear at some points<br />2) The pace was a bit too fast<br />3) Generally fluentKaung Myat Thuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16557375558466629655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-1508903247623643392013-07-10T12:19:31.664+08:002013-07-10T12:19:31.664+08:00Band 2
1) Too fast-paced
2) Not expressive
3) Fl...Band 2 <br /><br />1) Too fast-paced<br />2) Not expressive<br />3) FluentKaung Myat Thuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16557375558466629655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-27837139090939306202013-07-10T12:12:59.160+08:002013-07-10T12:12:59.160+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Akhilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03277826183194279067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-13016295928382918102013-07-10T11:01:10.676+08:002013-07-10T11:01:10.676+08:00Band 2
1) Good articulation
2) Expression and ton...Band 2<br /><br />1) Good articulation<br />2) Expression and tone could be improvised.<br />3) Dialogues doesn't seem like dialogues.Kaung Myat Thuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16557375558466629655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-52217025819133322482013-07-09T23:07:29.209+08:002013-07-09T23:07:29.209+08:00Band 2
Good overall read, but some words were not...Band 2<br /><br />Good overall read, but some words were not articulated clearly.hungkyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12302014048777510868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-58740242383100094132013-07-09T23:03:15.134+08:002013-07-09T23:03:15.134+08:00Band 2
Reading was quite fluent. However, pauses n...Band 2<br />Reading was quite fluent. However, pauses need to be made a little longer in some pararaphs or sentences. It sounds a little rushed at times.hungkyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12302014048777510868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-59409062353428791422013-07-09T22:25:55.829+08:002013-07-09T22:25:55.829+08:00Band 3
Most of the conversation sound monotonous ...Band 3<br /><br />Most of the conversation sound monotonous as though it was the same person talking.<br />Not much emphasis on certain wordsethanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10075121568401470636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-36943315154200249652013-07-09T22:19:25.430+08:002013-07-09T22:19:25.430+08:00Band 2
The reading of the passage was well read.
...Band 2<br /><br />The reading of the passage was well read.<br />However, there were some words that were missing instances where stress was not done for the ending sounds of words.ethanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10075121568401470636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-84878718157713779302013-07-09T22:19:17.733+08:002013-07-09T22:19:17.733+08:00Band 2
The reading of the passage was well read.
...Band 2<br /><br />The reading of the passage was well read.<br />However, there were some words that were missing instances where stress was not done for the ending sounds of words.ethanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10075121568401470636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-29586183880849419642013-07-09T21:38:19.488+08:002013-07-09T21:38:19.488+08:00Band 2
The correct pitch was used with reference...Band 2 <br /><br />The correct pitch was used with reference to the mood of what was being read. But articulations of the certain words were not clear. Kevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13829546390838449630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-12164289607505272852013-07-09T21:34:09.413+08:002013-07-09T21:34:09.413+08:00Band 2
Reading of the passage was very fluent.
...Band 2 <br /><br />Reading of the passage was very fluent. <br />However, there was not enough stress on certain words for emphasis. Kevinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13829546390838449630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-89394274320315316312013-02-20T11:56:59.701+08:002013-02-20T11:56:59.701+08:00Climate Change is said to cause the deaths of 100m...Climate Change is said to cause the deaths of 100million people by the year of 2030, if man fails to act accordingly, taken from the Huffington Post. The increase in carbon dioxide emission into the earth's atmosphere has caused climate change. This has been caused by man, as the human species has been engaging in activities such as deforestation and technological advancements.<br />Therefore, mankind should be held responsible for climate change.Ryan Yeohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01882587396396790457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-52147573489387082942013-02-20T11:38:06.655+08:002013-02-20T11:38:06.655+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Ryan Yeohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01882587396396790457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-67219260413552180972013-02-20T11:31:08.061+08:002013-02-20T11:31:08.061+08:00Climate change is a pressing issue present in the ...Climate change is a pressing issue present in the world right now. Climate change is the process whereby there is a constant rise in temperature. I opine that man should be blamed for climate change, this is because man is the dominating species in the world right now and we are the ones who are contributing hugely towards climate change. Activities such as deforestation, burning of fossil fuels and combustion of our trash is creating huge amounts of carbon dioxide which is a greenhouse gas. This therefore leads to an increase in temperature as greenhouse gasses build up. Hence, man should be blamed for climate change.<br /><br />-Daniel Lee(S304)Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17856172970102075884noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-77778452506685462242013-02-20T11:30:29.881+08:002013-02-20T11:30:29.881+08:002012 was the year with record ice melt, with arcti...2012 was the year with record ice melt, with arctic ice only covering parts of the arctic ocean. Soon enough, the year when ice-free summers in the arctic will come. Climate change has been affecting the world in many ways, causing many animals to go endangered and even extinct. Human activities like industries, deforestation, and burning fossil fuels, contributed to the different aspects of climate change. In my opinion, man should be blamed for climate change.<br /><br />-passage not with me- (this was written on the spot)kitkat.yjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03961242010928905466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-89481230815985786392013-02-20T11:29:42.876+08:002013-02-20T11:29:42.876+08:00Climate change is a shift in weather conditions id...Climate change is a shift in weather conditions identified mainly by changes in temperature. It is now an important and serious environmental problem which would result in dire consequences if actions are not taken against it. Changes in climate occur due to heat being trapped on earth. Greenhouse gases emitted during Man’s activities trap heat on earth,increasing global temperatures. I am of the opinion that mankind is responsible for changes in climate due to our activities such as industrialization, deforestation and transportation.<br />Akhilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03277826183194279067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-73971750993067913782013-02-20T11:20:13.696+08:002013-02-20T11:20:13.696+08:00The world has changed drastically in the last few ...The world has changed drastically in the last few decades. One example is the climate change.<br />Climate change is caused by many factors, causing a rise in Earth's temperatures, leading to many negative consequences that affect all of earth’s inhabitants. However, mankind should not be responsible for the global rise of temperatures. Climate change is caused mainly by natural processes that are not within the control of mankind. In addition, mankind has also taken various measures to reduce the rate of climate change. Hence, mankind should not be held responsible for climate change.<br /><br />Done By: Yi Xian Foong Yan Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14001102282416911284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-40815584269326273392013-02-20T11:13:36.546+08:002013-02-20T11:13:36.546+08:00Tourists' paradise Maldives is the only countr...Tourists' paradise Maldives is the only country which is only 4 feet above sea level. This country is at high risk of going underwater in less than a hundred years as in the last century, the sea level has risen 8 inches. Scientists fear that in another hundred years, the sea level will rise up to 23 inches because of the alarming changes in global warming. Climate change is a significant and lasting change in the statistical distribution of weather patterns over periods ranging from decades to millions of years. Climate Change is caused by many various factors such as tectonic activity and ocean circulation and human activities. These human activities are specifically activities like deforestation, use of factories for man made items which release a lot of carbon to the atmosphere for the growing population’s needs. In my opinion, man is to be blamed for climate change due to causing the excessive clearance of trees and excessive release of carbon and other harmful gases to the atmosphere.Ishanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02954309978515565378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-61354081631441947422013-02-20T11:08:10.954+08:002013-02-20T11:08:10.954+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Akhilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03277826183194279067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-89044210472287287122013-02-20T10:40:19.481+08:002013-02-20T10:40:19.481+08:00The Earth has, and is undergoing a process known a...The Earth has, and is undergoing a process known as climate change due to the activities caused by mankind. Such activities include combustion of waste materials, deforestation, a huge release of carbon dioxide and monoxide through buildings such as coal-burning power stations and automobiles. These activities have caused us to leave behind a huge carbon footprint. Because of this the Earth's temperature is rising drastically and as such wildfires can start in the forest, temperatures rise and sea levels rise to increase chances of flooding. Therefore, action has to be taken to reduce the negative effects and slow the process of climate change to a stop.<br />Blocker226https://www.blogger.com/profile/15345004523579287417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-77405487869739274882013-02-20T10:38:14.412+08:002013-02-20T10:38:14.412+08:00With the constant rise of temperature and sea leve...With the constant rise of temperature and sea level, numerous researchers states that man should be blamed for the climate change. Man or man kind have been inhabiting on this planet for more than millions of years from one generation to another, so, are man really the source of climate change? I opine that Man are the source of climate change as man are not willing to use eco-friendly technologies, reduce the usage of non-biodegradable products and reduce carbon emission. Foong Yan Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14001102282416911284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-81348574839225906472013-02-20T09:55:20.737+08:002013-02-20T09:55:20.737+08:00Climate change is one of the biggest phenomena abo...Climate change is one of the biggest phenomena about earth and there are also many discussions and debates over what causes climate change. Although it is very highly believed that climate change is caused due to man's activities, there are also other possibilities as well. A recent study in mid-2010 tells us that the earth undergoes a cycle, in which it would have the peak of hot temperature environment and then passing into a new cycle through ice age. It is possible that the earth is undergoing the heat period of the cycle, thus causing climate change. In addition, no matter what, our survival instincts and needs for developments is always prioritized as part of our human nature. Therefore, man should not be blamed for climate change. Kaung Myat Thuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16557375558466629655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-28578644083642581172013-02-20T09:45:29.665+08:002013-02-20T09:45:29.665+08:00The climate has changed due to the activities caus...The climate has changed due to the activities caused by man. Such activities include combustion of waste materials, deforestation, a huge release of carbon dioxide and monoxide. These activities have caused us to leave behind a huge carbon footprint. With all these greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, the Earth's temperature is rising drastically such that there are random wildfires in the forest, heat-waves and other heat related consequences by the environment. Therefore, action has to be taken to reduce the effects and prevent climate change from happening.Ryan Chewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07964389712460524912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-12178263280259195732013-02-19T23:18:41.448+08:002013-02-19T23:18:41.448+08:00Man is to be blamed for causing climate change due...Man is to be blamed for causing climate change due to our activities. Activities such as deforestation, burning of non-biodegradable objects, advancements in technology etc. , have resulted in the increase of carbon dioxide in our atmosphere and thus effectively causing the increase of our Earth's temperature, leading to climate change. If we continue such activities, we will be increasing the Earth's temperature constantly and after some time Earth may become too hot for humans to live. Thus, we need to take action to prevent climate change from occurring before it is too late.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6745419240679488851.post-12653712210914986202013-02-19T23:01:48.400+08:002013-02-19T23:01:48.400+08:00The activities of man are to be blamed for the ris...The activities of man are to be blamed for the rising climate changes in the world and the consequences that follow after. As every little thing that men do that affect the environment in any way, be it driving a car to communicating with other people, it produces more greenhouse gases that will be trapped in the Earth's atmosphere. This will in turn cause the rise of the average temperature of the Earth causing climate change to happen at a faster rate.ethanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10075121568401470636noreply@blogger.com